Tuesday, February 20, 2007

Buddies Don't Bite - unedited excerpt



But then, inside, something intangible tipped over…

Arms like steel bands closed tight around her, and his tongue gently pressed between her lips, demanding entrance. She let him in, loving the strange coolness of the moist and mobile pressure.

Her arms came up, hands roving over his hard back beneath his thin cotton shirt. And the touch of that was cool too, like woven cobwebs slipping and sliding over marble.

Although she’d lived with this man for months, she very, very rarely touched him. She’d quite forgotten the shock of his cold skin when they’d shaken hands to seal their house‑sharing agreement, but now his hurried talk of poor circulation came back into her mind.

But there was nothing wrong with his circulation today, it seemed. Everything about him was active and hungry and full of life. Where before he’d been diffident, he was vibrant and eager now. Where he’d seemed to be holding back, he’d opened wide the gates.

Tugging at each other, they were suddenly on the kitchen floor just as she’d imagined, kissing like maniacs. Zack threw one long lean leg across her, and reacquainted Teresa with that phenomenal bulge about which she was forever fantasising.

This is demented! I’m kissing my landlord and he’s got a hard-on!

Unable to contain herself, Teresa surged against him, rocking herself shamelessly against Zack’s sturdy erection. So much for keeping their distance from and observing ‘friends only’ no go areas! Her outburst seemed to have altered all the parameters. There didn’t seem to be anywhere she couldn’t venture now.

He had the most glorious backside. Tight and hard and round like a brace of ripe apples. And when she grasped it, he growled in his throat in a most astonishing way. Deep and fierce, like the call of a jungle animal, it bounced off the kitchen walls and filled her ears. If she hadn’t had his tongue in her mouth, Teresa would have said, ‘What the hell is going on?’

But their tongues were dancing and she felt like growling too.

Deep in her belly, a famished hunger was gnawing at her. It was a long while since she’d had good sex. A real, hard, long wonderful session in bed… She’d held back with Steve, and had been hoping this weekend would be their romantic first time. But now, she thanked every lucky star in heaven that she hadn’t succumbed…

Now, she knew she’d been waiting and saving herself for Zack, and that the long weeks of abstinence would be worth it.

Oh, I want you! she cried silently to him, massaging his sensational bottom, and squirreling herself around against his cock.

Zack’s answer was to growl again, a low feral sound. His lips crushed hers, his tongue thrusting, thrusting, just like the sex act. Where the kiss had been gentle and controlled at first, it was totally off the rails now. His mouth started to rove, moving roughly, messily, thrillingly over her face, along her jaw, as his hips rocked and jerked in an explicit rhythm that met and matched hers.

It was like being a horny teenager all over again, but magnified to the n’th degree. Every part of her was hot. They were rubbing against each other like crazy animals, and Teresa was the one making moaning noises now, unable to contain herself as Zack’s hands went all over the place. Her breasts. Her thighs. The cleft of her bottom. He was surveying her physical geography, and he was impatient. His fingers wriggled between their bodies, tugging at her skirt and searching for access to her sex.

And all the while he was kissing, licking, tasting… and nibbling.

Nibbling? More than that… as his mouth reached her throat, she suddenly yelped and jerked beneath him.

Dear God, that is so hot! He’s biting my neck!

9 comments:

Monique said...

Wow! I can't wait to read the rest

Saskia Walker said...

Wow indeed! Add me to the list of can't-wait-to-read-it :) This read so REAL!

Portia Da Costa said...

Thanks for the kind words, guys! I've been feeling very doubtful about Buds, but now I feel much happier with it. Well, this particular bit, at least... :)

Rob Graham said...

That was very good.

Such rich language is a very rare treat. You described the emotions of the central character very well.

And I liked the way you dropped the hints about Zack's, um, condition. Tiny pebbles to create ripples of doubt in the reader's mind.

Very well done.

Portia Da Costa said...

Thanks, Rob! I'm so glad you enjoyed the excerpt... It's the first paranormal I've done in donkey's years and my first vampire story, so it's heartening that people are liking what I've posted so far.

Love

WendyPortia

Maria Guinan said...

Hi, did this book ever get published? Can't find it under this title.

Portia Da Costa said...

Hi Maria

Yes, Buddies Don't Bite has been published. It's a novella and it's included in my anthology THE RED COLLECTION, along with another novella and quite a few stories.

HTH

Maria Guinan said...

Excellent, got it on my kindle and reading now.

Portia Da Costa said...

Wonderful! I do hope you enjoy Buddies and all the other stories. :)